L04: Subediting

In order to gain feedback on the articles, I sent the body copy to my client at SPH Publishing. After reviewing the article, they sent me the following subediting and feedback.

They also gave me some specific strengths and weaknesses of my magazine.

Based on the feedback I received from SPH Publishing, I will be making modifications and additions to this article to improve on it. To begin with, I will correct the literacy errors made as these make the article look unprofessional.  After that, I will be adding the introductory paragraphs to each section. In terms of the strengths, they reflect the intent of the magazine article, and therefore verify that this article is effective.